Hey Bike Party People– let us know what you think of the test logo in the previous post. Still working out some kinks, but how do you like it so far?
Overall, I like it! As a marketing person, I’d say the D and the C look cramped and a little lost. I’d probably try taking them past half way and see how it looks…might give them a little more presence. And that would get the D out of the way of the front bike fork. I’d also go for some gears and/or a pedal to fill that empty space between the letters. Note on the logo in the top banner. The two bars with “bike party” way overwhelm the DC of the bike. They’re so much thicker than any other line, I didn’t even notice the DC when I first looked at it. I’m sure you weren’t looking for that level of feedback, but my last job was a Brand Manager and I couldn’t help myself.
Looking forward to next month!
Evie– thank you very much for the feedback– VERY helpful! I am going to send that to the designer and see what edits she can make. All very valid points.
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